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Re: Chapter 1: Rush
Allo! here to review:) I really liked your story! It was gripping and action packed and you already have sympathy for the main character and...! It just has everything that ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: The Blue File chapter 1
The staff twirled around her fingers like an epileptic ballerina. It was odd – the staff. It was thin, as thin as the delicate paws of a butterfly or as ...
Sep 10, 2011
