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Re: Flower Pot Scene
First off, let me just say that whoever has to clean this up and pay for damages will not be happy xDDD Anyways, your local review fairy has had a ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: Some of the sky ch 1
Hello! I'm your local review fairy, here to give your work a review! So first off, let me just say that its brave of you to post this, it takes ...
Apr 23, 2025 -
Re: I am nothing more than the birth of ruin.
Okay, first off, this poem is beautifully written I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Now, onto the reviewing! First off, I love your use of bold words and the "I am ...
Apr 23, 2025 -
Re: “You can’t keep chasing the past”
OKAY SO FIRST OFF THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I have really bad adhd and usually don't keep attention that long but this really drew me in! Onto the review! Normally ...
Feb 17, 2025 -
Re: mx. forgettable
Hiiii, so I'm not usually one to read poetry but I really liked this! I very much like the beat to it, I'm a sucker for those. And while not ...
Feb 17, 2025 -
Re: He killed Himself
First of all, let me say that this poem is so beautiful in an incredibly sad sense. It accurately depicts the struggles of grief and regret. As a passionate believer ...
Oct 1, 2024 -
Re: Perdita Beaumont-The mysteries of love
Hello! So first off, let me say that Perdita and Thorne are soooo cute! I enjoyed the story and it had a lot of sweet moments in it that I ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: Bound by Silence: The Weight of Invisible Chains
Hello! To start off, I really love this story! I loved how you portrayed the feelings of being trapped so accurately in a realistic view point. You did a great ...
Sep 25, 2024 -
Re: I'm Cold
Okay, so first off, I love this short story! The way the girl dies is a very creative way that I haven't heard of before! Now some tips I would ...
Sep 20, 2024