GlassRaven

Thankyouuuuu for the review :D I didn't exactly spend much time on this story, and its interesting that it sounds like a children's story. I suppose I leaned towards that ...

Thanks for scratching out those typos, I know they were everywhere, sorry. I'm really glad you liked, thanks for the review :D

Thankyou so much for this review! sorry about so many typos too :P ugh. I'll consider those ideas and maybe expand the story a little. Originally I planned for it ...