Gladius

You've kept the same style which can be really difficult, but then again, this is only the start, we'll see what happens further on. The plot is being explored and ...

Okie dokie, I've decided I will have a Christmas chapter. It may not be...exactly one of my best, but I hope it enlightens and stuns you. :twisted: *insert evil laugh ...

Your writing is marvelous! :oops: awww shucks... I also agree with Tamora. I haven't played the games, though they've always looked interesting. Now I want to play them. You do ...

Ok, I know this chap's short but it should be very interesting. :twisted: *evil laugh* Enjoy! ************************ Chapter 3: Dragonfire The dragon’s head swept back and forth as it scanned ...

Yay! Goodness comments! :-D Thanks! You're both right, Jabber and Tamora- semicolons appear to be a weak point. :-X i'm working on lessening them in my next two chaps, but ...

“So- what brings you to our peaceful home?” Vanessa’s mother asked as she retrieved the knitting and sat in her rocker. I thought he was the Hero of Time, lol. ...

Ok, Jab, just for you- here's the second chapter! :grin: ************************************************************* Chapter 2: Warrior’s Beginning Vanessa Satori was amusing her younger brother S

*wonders if she should just finish and post Chapter 2: Warrior's Beginnings* >.>

Yay! a fellow dragon enthusiast!!! *hi five* There seem to be a lot on here, actually... *shrug* ANYWAY- *to the harness* I like the sound of that. But that's going ...