GirsBlueAvenger

I enjoyed this much, and would like to see how it plays out. I like how the guy actually has a form of chivalry, because your character's right most guys ...

Thanks for the review :)

^ ^ ding ding we have a winner

Anyone want to take a crack at it's meaning? :roll: none of my friends guessed right Hovering on the edge of a brink You push me off with two firm ...

I love when people write from personal experiences. The story ends up even more believable. I'll say something i've pretty much read every story you've wrote on here. Keep up ...

I did wonder what they looked like also. But being up at past 4am and reading and something actually catching my attention is pretty rare haha But I read this ...

Gives you a gold star ^ ^ I liked it . Kinda confused what it's about but a very cute poem none the less. Flowed easily keep up the work ...

Besides the reference to perfection and twilight book characters, I enjoyed it ^^. Question though how old exactly are your characters? And I'd like to know more of how Ebony ...

Funny how insolence can lead to fatality How longing can lead to blindness Broken promises turning into sabotage Unfulfilled truths forming chasms Glazed eyes flailing to see what is before ...

D: post more i thoroughly enjoyed that

by the way guys I am working on this story more. I might be writing it from chapter one since one of my good friends has been pestering me too ...

^__^ thanks for the review. Ah yea I know yet again.. this was kind of a daydream on ride home from college sooo I'm still trying to think on how ...

MM forget the soup I want the cookie!! nom nom nom Seriously I feel better today so I will get right onto those revisions.

I'll get right onto that as soon as I fell better Hey thanks or nitpicking and finding all the errors! I jotted all of this down within an hour lol... ...

Thanks no that was helpful :) Lets me know what I'm doing right. As for adding to it I am trying to think up more for this preferably before the ...