Girl_in_pink

DON'T LET IT BECOME CLICHE! Right now it is quite original and interesting, but I see how (in the future story) it could quite easily become no more that just ...

I'm not really sure what i think of this poem. I wasn't bad but it wasn't great. Sorry to seem harsh, but its the reality. You ramble about mushrooms? But ...

How sho( shower!) Shower in slang means looking peng!-peng means looking hot. But when talking about some-thing, say an object it means good. phew..glad i got that over and out. ...

I really love this i do, i really do. I'm loving the characters and how you made the story flow.. I'm loving the perfect idea and i can tell you've ...

I really love this i do, i really do. I perfect idea and i can tell you've realy thought about it to a sense. Although i love. I would say, ...

I really loved this piece, and i hope theres many more to come. Do you have a website and what inspired you to this piece. One other thing. I suggest, ...