Gingahcakes

I love how completely honest you are in this. You're speaking from your heart and making sure your lover knows that you are completely infatuated with them. I love your ...

This was an awesome thing to write about! It makes me think of some people I have pictures of, but don't fully know who they are. I entirely get what ...

Great job! This is an awesome piece of poetry, but I do want to point out when you say: 'Life is full of fakes left and right'

I liked the repetition of the line 'Inside this book'. I think it worked well in this poem. Since other people have already pointed out you mistakes and whatnot, let ...

You made me cry. I also had a friend who died of cancer. I know how you must feel. I'm sorry for your loss. Just hope she's in a better ...

I find this to be a beautiful piece of work. Other people already pointed out your mistakes, so let me point out good things. :D First off, you sucked me ...

I love this! I'm questioning the pain thing now, too! Now look what you did. Your making me ponder weird things. Anywho, I won't point out any grammatical errors because ...

First off, I wanted to tell you this was great. I loved this soooo much. You were very descriptive in your poem. You had a few errors like: 'detergent filled, ...

This mad me laugh. It was very realistic though. I have to get up at 5 am everyday to go to school. It sucks a lot. I hate high school. ...

I love this. It thoroughly explains how you feel hollow inside because of a heartbreak, I think? I think it was a heartbreak. I loved the repetition of the word ...

Other readers have already pointed out the grammatical errors, so I won't point it out just like gauravkundu32. This was a brilliant piece. this is a really realistic piece. I ...

Talk about Saw. XD This was great. I could imagine all the locks, traps, and poison in this poem. I could sense the fear and realization of entrapment. I got ...

Oh my gosh. I did not see that coming. I clicked this because of the title. I take law and it interested me. Reading this I thought she just had ...

This is a nice poem. Yet, your lines are a bit off. I feel like they should be spilt off at different parts. Other than that, you wrote a really ...

This is a beautiful piece of work. You described the man's lips very well. When you mention that his lips are, and I quote, 'shaped for perfection, or destruction', I ...