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Re: Aschenputtel Chapter 1
Hello! First of all, I really like your point of view. It makes it feel like we, the readers, are inside the head of your narrator, which is an interesting ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 1
Hello :) First of all, I would just like to say that this is a wonderful story and I can not wait to engage in it more. I loved the ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
First of all, this is my first review, so sorry if it is bad :) "There's a hush of the crowd." ~For me this was a little awkward, and sort ...
Jul 11, 2017