GildedLily

Horseradish, Thank you very much for the advice! I'll take it to heart. :) All good luck to you as well.

Horseradish, Thank you very much for the advice! I'll take it to heart. :) All good luck to you as well.

Kyllorac, Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate it greatly! :D Your tips on line breaks were especially useful. Perhaps it is a coconut. In truth, I was ...

Calligraphy, Actually, many poems (such as this) can be written in paragraph form, especially when they are written like letters. Still, I understand that you mean the format can run ...

Hello, Kyllorac. I was wondering if you would review my two pieces, 'Sunscreen', and 'Foreign Bloom'. They can both be found in my portfolio. I understand if you do not ...

Hello, ladypurple. You made a pretty and unique comparison with rain to dancers. I really like how the second paragraph reads. That said, the first paragraph seems a bit...clashing. I ...

Foreign Bloom Precious, pliant seed, you, washed on this new land by jealous current, are pitiable. How often have lonely pilgrims landed desolate, crushed by native resistance? To prosper here, ...

Sunscreen As odd as it sounds, you are not unlike the sun; Your comforting attention illuminates the soul, Fans the flames of a pining heart, Nourishes and sustains me— Yet ...