GibsonGirl

HAHA I’m not a bloody poofter!” Poofy things..... that's a great word. I have an idea about a sequel...muahahaha!! Actually, I've got a few in mind. Jack Shepherd is Gay ...

After reading this, I don't know much about Reynolds. From what I've seen, he's an average rich guy with a couple kids. This might have been too short to really ...

The rhyming here gives this a singsong-y feeling, which isn't good, even in a song. I liked the first verse, but after that the constant rhyming got annoying. In the ...

In addition to what Pandora said, the chorus wasn't that great. where are you? you've gone too far away. Where are you? why can't you just stay? why are you ...

Some lines here are pretty good, but mostly there's nothing that hasn't already been said by countless other poets. I'm falling,falling into the dark I have seen this line so ...

I liked this a lot. Unlike Brad, I think the imagery worked very well. It described a breakup (I'm guessing) in a unique way. Down the street, I can see ...

This song was OK. Nothing really jumps out though, and I think that's a problem. Most of it is sort of cliche and a little hard to realate to. I ...

The cool Matt...the lyrics are just wicked cliche. He mentions "blackness" 4815162342 times.

Yield to the sign Pray to your God Nothing is mine It’s all a façade This is the part that sounded forced. Other than that, it's pretty good.

Hmm. This is pretty good. There's some forced rhyming here, which I don't have time to point out. I'll (hopefully) be back later to say more.

This is...okay. It defintley needs work, but the idea has potential. I agree with with Maggie, the constant rhyming reminds me of a musical. Just make it flow with the ...

Maggie and Emily: Thanks for posting, even though you've probably seen it in person. I hope there's somebody to sing it too... Lufgif: I think she means that it doesn't ...

Wow, like everyone said, this is amazing. At first I actually didn't like it that much. I thought it was just another sort of average poem. When I realized it ...

This poem is okay. I can't really decide if I like it or not. You used some nice imagery, but the flow is what gets me. On one hand, I ...

I only have a minute, but here goes: The only problem I have with this is the use of "life" in the last line, as it's the word you used ...