Ghostwriter

This was quite good for a general beginning. But It didn't leave enough for a hint. Was it a diffrent time frame? Where they in some crazy hospital? Who was ...

Now this story is funny. It made me smile, and that's must mean it's a very good story. I loved how you project Buddy as almost human until you add ...

This is a pretty good idea and story beginning. But you revealed too much too soon...the reader will feel kind of like they had been flooded! Just make a steam ...

It really is quite good. I think there's a deeper meaning to this and it showed. I can't say anything bad about it. It's better then a couple of poems ...

Okay, I did a quick scan through it and I understand why you got a C on it. You should have gotten a B- for effort. The beginning was a ...

I Do like it and the story is short and sweet. But simply it's the fact that you keep mentioning the sheep in anyway...you sound a bit tired then, Almost ...

It's a pretty impressive Story. It doe's add a sense of terror, mystery, and questioning about who these old people are and why is the place so deserted...and why isn't ...

It seems very long...Did you take all the time since you joined to write the first chapter...or do you just write that long for kicks? Maybe you should put this ...

This doe's need some editing. But this is quiet excellent starting topic. It makes you wonder what the 30 note's are about. However, the Beginning was a bit confusing. I'm ...

I Love it. It show's something simple yet deep. You have to wonder about that man and who he is...or what he is for that matter. The Ryming was not ...

Hello, I'm the Author of the storybook Harborville, and I'm glad and proud that people are writing fiction about the quiet yet deadly harborville. I have to say, This is ...

Now that's a prolouge! You added a lot of mystery to it and didn't reveal who Mrs. Paige is...or what she doe's. But you showed her as a cold blooded ...

I can say...well, I don't know what to say. You wrote a song that I can't tell wether or not your writing about showing pity to the young man, Showing ...

It really doe's put a image in your mind, and it's grammer is well. It show's that you really worked on this. I think that many would say that this ...

I have to say that I was humming a tune and I suddenly found this peom and it really gone well with it. I have to say it is a ...