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Re: I Will Survive
Wow this was good. I am a small person myself and this helps lift me out of my random depression. Though I noticed a few mistakes the poem was very ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Long Patrol
Ghost "I can see from your body stature and supply, you're a medic," I said looking Starr over, "I'd think you would be better fed, if you don't mind, my ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Captured Chapter 2
Ok this was really good. I only saw a few spelling, grammer, and punctuation mistakes. I loved the fight scean and how discriptive you were when the character was running ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Captured Chapter 1
Wow! This is really good! I love fiction and action adventure books and this combines both perfectly. It also combines one of my favourte things that usually doesn't have much ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: In Between Sheets
It was pretty dang good. You did discribe the setting, the character, the feel of the room. Great job! I can't wait to read the rest.
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Free as a Stallion am I
Free as a stallion, Yet locked away, Never to see the light of day, Nothing but the comfort of my dreams, In my dreams I see, In my dreams I ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: The Anarchy Chapter 2
These storys are very suspenseful and very good. I really can't wait till then next part! Keep writting and don't forget to proofread I saw a couple spelling mistakes for ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
Yep I'm in the middle of Part 2 of my Eagle Talon Book. If you happen to read the first part feel free to leave a comment and let me ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Exposed Chapter 1
Keep it going this was really good I am exited to read more. I love action addventure stories and animals so this is a perfect combination and could easyily make ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Long Patrol
Name: Ghost (its just a callsighn) Gender: female Reason for joining the Patrol:This sounds intresting and i am very stealthy Rank: i would like to be a medic but anything ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: The Anarchy
Wow this is pretty good, i only spotted one small problem, you don't really have a clear time period. Other than that this is really good. Great Job!!
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: EDIT:Phantom of the Opera Poem
This is pretty good i write poems too and none of mine quite like this, for example, my poems always have a hidden meaning, but this is a flow of ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Eagle Talon Book1: A Threat Arises
Cp1: I’m Ghost, one of the best leaders of Division thirteen of the Eagle Talon Army. My friend and partner Commander Cody, was backed against a wall he called me ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Ice (Join it, you know you want to. JOIN!)
Name- Ghost Age- looks-18 real age-14 Type-Lyken Apperance- human- white, young, short. Wolf Beast- solid black
Jul 21, 2011