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Cp17: I woke with a jolt in my cabin instead of an Eagle Talon hospital or recovery room like I expected. My breathing was heavy, as if I had just ...

Because I hit maxed out the character limit in the last part I had to continue it into a seprat post, so here is the rest of the Eagle Talon ...

Yeah, I do think I can make the chapters longer but it would've gone over the character limit to add even the best part to this, I had to cut ...

Cp 1: My entire team was surrounded by over one-thousand Viper troops. They were led by none other than Adam, who had broken out of the prison and rallied the ...

Hahaha, you had mistakes in spelling, a small typo with confusing where with wore, I do that all the time don't worry, and I can't spell worth a crap so ...

Actually to make a reveiw, it has to actually point out at least one specific mistake, I think you can't hold me by that though because I dunno. Anyway, yes ...

Ok if this was made into one of the Assassin's Creed games, it'd be THE BEST out of all, though considering Revilations is Ezio's final chapter I highly doubt it ...

Considering I'm compleatly obssesed with Assassin's Creed, I can only say that I loved it. I spotted a few mistakes which where pointed out in previous responses such as the ...

Ha, Ha, make that mistake so much its gotten somewhat funny, thank you for pointing it out.

I liked it alot. There was good description, I could almost see what Carter was seeing, though I'm half glad I couldn't literally feel what she did. As far as ...

A Dream Once Shrouded A dream, A dream shrouded in mystery, One that no person has known, A secret A hope A faith A dream. It is hidden in the ...

I liked it, and personally one of my best books was supposed to be a stupid short story, but turned really long and amazing, maybe you could do the same ...

This poem has all the qualities of an amazing poem: raw emotion, a good word flow (though that could use a tiny bit of work), it captures the essecense of ...

I loved it. It had a fluent movement of syllables and rhyme. I can also make a connection to the poem, such as a dead relitive, freind, or pet that ...

I definitly liked it. The one thing I love about all of these parts is that they all have suspense and it seems as if the entire book is the ...