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Thank you! It's disturbing in a good way. I'm so glad you liked it :D

Lol. Pink, I wanted to tell you, but I didn't want to bother you with my posts. I'm happy that you liked it and I started to pay attention for ...

Thanks Tanya. Yea, I felt the same thing: The piece wasn't entirely fulfilling to me. I'll rewrite it and try to fix things. That's how sad pieces work with me, ...

Pulchritudinous, there is more description and I gave more details about the house and the smell and so on, but I wrote those details before he entered the living room ...

Really? Lol thanks! I've been wondering whether people would ever touch my book if it reached the shelves. :D Happy that you liked it, so very happy.

Yay! Thanks Shub and Book!! :D I know, guys, I do pick the wrong words sometimes. When you read a weird misplaced word in there, know that's when someone talked ...

You're absolutely right. And you know what? Sometimes it's delicious to doubt ourselves... I mean delicious when we get over it, of course. Lol It's exactly why we do rough ...

Dear God, I'm going to faint! X.X You liked it too! How come you all like it? That's impossible! Thank you, thank you! I'm so happy that you guys just ...

Thanks a lot, Pink! You helped me out so so much and I'll rewrite the parts that needs to be changed. :D I'm so happy you liked it, especially that ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Dear loving God, you posted this comment while I was seriously going out of mind and having doubts in my writing style. I can't ...

o.o Dear god! What will happen next? He should apologize now! He shouldn't make her feel like she's taken for granted. Girl, you're inspiring. Take my word for it! Chapter ...

:( Poor Luke. T.T He never had a real family! *clicks on chapter six with wide eyes*

Why don't you merge one and two together? It's your call, though. And good luck :D

I'm really glad you liked the writing style itself. I think that's the basis of a good novel, even though I do know that the excerpt is quite short. Thing ...

Whoa! Deep, refreshing and mature? I'm in love with that sentence