Georgiexx

O M G! I loved this so much. You are a brilliant writer! everytime you write it keeps getting better and better. but also it is pulling at my heart ...

Aawwwww... it was so, so ....wonderfully brilliant. I loved the way it was written. At the begining i thought the closecloseclose thing was going to get irratating, but it didnt, ...

Heya Kiwisatsuma, Firstly, i just wanted to say how much i loved your story, it made me smile and turning into the softy i really am. I didnt notice anything ...

Hey, I just wanted to say that even though the story may be cliche, it has its own kind of twist among it. I loved that your MC had a ...

Hey, welcome to YWS Aliyah, I found your piece interesting, it went from a happy love story to the death of the MC's love; it flowed well. I was captivated, ...

Haha, i loved it. i dont think i can make a serious review out of this, it was funny. I found myself laughing out loud at some point in the ...

hey, I agree with Wolfdaemon. This story does have a lot of potential but it needs a lot of work done on the grammar and the spelling side of things, ...

Hey, i have to say that even though it was very short i actually liked it. it was different to what people normally write on here and it had its ...

Hey ultraviolet! I love this story, it is so amazingly original. Your MC seems like a awesome typical teenager, so well done there. I like that i havn't heard of ...

Hey, First off i just wanted to tell you how much i loved your characters. I know others have said that Oliver was a bit up front, but i think ...

MADDY!!!! loved the story, it was definetly interesting. It was definetly individual and well thought of. it kept my attention and seemed to be fine with the spelling side of ...

I Agreed with FRAYEDjade. i loved the sespence that you created between the characters and how you left the ending open for more thought. But i also totally agree that ...

Hey, Very well written. Loved that the song fits in nicely with the story. Okay so i dont have much that i found wrong with it. "Don't do this. You ...

Hey, The only bad thing i actually noticed is that your story seems a bit rushed. take your time to explain the little things. eg, when they killed the robot ...

Smashles ;) First up, i love it! It had all the girly teenage emotions crammed into your main character, the sorrow and the pain of heart break. Also the unusual ...