Geoff_23

Note: I haven't posted anything on here in a while.(4 months to be exact :cry: ) Here is my second paper I would like to share. Any feedback is appreciated. ...

Though I do not have any suggestions or errors to point out, I would just like to say well done! The narration is raw and bold, regardless of what emotions ...

I work at Subway and while I was reading this, I noticed a hint of familiar emotions towards rude customers. hehe

I thought this was good. I loved the irony at the end. However, I think it could have a little more inserted into the last stanza to smooth over the ...

I may not be an expert on photography, but you seem to be more advanced than an amateur photographer. My favorite would be the fences.

I would just like to say that overall, I found this poem very amusing. I may not fully understand the universal theme, but it made me think and look beyond ...

Note: Hello everyone! I am new to this site and have no clue on if this will go through. This was an assignment in school and it was the only ...