GeneralKaseyDaBomd

I can't say anything about this poem that hasn't already been said! Amazing and beautiful! It was very peaceful and flowing. Very in depth writing, and as a plus there ...

Once I finish this book(there are five books in this series) the death of Lightning Prime will make more sense in the story.

Great fan fiction overall. A little more description would enhance the writing and create a better picture for the reader, but that is the only flaw that I see.

It's nice to see a fan fiction from the view of Tribe cats, but a few errors in punctuation and grammar lower the quality of the piece.

That's alright. Even just a comment saying it was good helps me continue writing. I'm currently having writers block so hopefully I can get out of it

Your sense of rhythm is remarkable and the poem really struck me. It is a long poem, but enjoyable to read. For the people who have felt the pain of ...

Very creative way to tell a great story, expecially in such few sentences. Although there wasn't much rhythm to the poem it expresses the hard life of a thief in ...