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Re: All I Know of Hate - Chapter One
Wow! Thanks guys! :) I'm glad you like it! I'm finishing up the last few paragraphs of chapter two as we speak so I should be uploading it in just ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: When the Sand Runs Out (Chapter One - Katie)
Thanks so much for the reviews guys! :) I'm going to re-work a lot of stuff in this chapter tonight and I agree with what you said about info dumping. ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Azaleas for Susie
Oh. My. Gosh. That was AWESOME!!! I love it! Great job! The only thing I found was that I believe it's spelled 'fuschia.' :) ~GenShawklan
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Wings - Chapter Two (Carly)
Okay! :) I like that idea and I think I'll add it as a beginning - like she gets knocked out and all that a few characters who won't be ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: The Meetinghouse (Prologue)
Okay, thanks! :) I'll try and fix it.
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Love [edited]
This is nice so far. :) Maybe you could try and add more suspense, particularly before he proposes and before she says yes. Good job!
May 18, 2010