GeekyKid

Thank you keekers :)....will extend it though....

Enjoyed it.....would love to read the longer version though.....

Enjoyed reading this piece..fantastic work..more suspense would have made it better..and a few errors..but good job :)

Thank you Dover...really appreciated..and yes I did realize the spelling after posting the story..guess I was typing fast and didn't realize the spelling errors...but thanks again...appreciated :)

Thank you very much...and No it didn't actually happen..just something that came to my head..but thanks again :)

"Suzie wake up" said my father while knocking on my bedroom door. It was a normal Monday morning, hopped out of bed, spent hours getting ready, got breakfast and waited ...

I totally love this poem..Great work....Could really understand exactly what it conveys...Although to me...I may be stupid but instead of repeating the "I believe" in third and fourth stanza like ...

Thanks...for the encouragement..much better...didn't even think of that..thanks though :)

Thanks for the was basically supposed to be a mystery..where the readers are supposed to figure out what she went through..But thanks anyways :)

An uncomfortable burning sensation crept inside her as she woke up. She sat on her bed and began to cry, as she tried to figure out what had her such ...