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I completely understand, I hate info dumps. The short story I am writing is about is David and Jay. I don't want this paragraph to dominate the story. I am ...

You see, I can't do a scene with this one. Because it goes into another scene.

I write it a while ago, and found it on my computer. Hope you like it. I'm not really good at poetry, so let it rip.

Interesting. What moved you to write this piece?

I like it, but the sentences are a little chopy. But I really like it. A lot of repeting yourself.