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Re: Liberty and Debauchery
Liberty ends where debauchery begins. Freedom is the privilege of saying and doing whatever we want. Debauchery is when freedom is abused in such way that it goes againt ethics, ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Love
Hey there, Trackrunner. Okay, so this is a really good poem. ^_^ I really like it. Except that you should make it look like one. Make stanzas, click enters. Here ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: I Do?
Hi Jessa, this is a truly beautiful poem you wrote here. "this is the hardest part , " she says, "but he is meeting you halfway." This is a huge ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: true love
Hi there, Flowerboy! I'm here to review. Okay, so first off I hate the fact that you use no uppercases, I think I'll get use to it or a better ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: A Hundred Suns- Blind
Hi Wabbit. Here to review. ^_^ Wow. You are one talented writer, Jorin, I must say that. I really love this. I think your writing is amazing. :o I really ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: The Beach
So yesterday we went to the beach... a really strange beach, it didn't really had palm trees... o.0 But anyways, I got pictures. ^_^ mhm.jpg ^-^.jpg That's my big sister, ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Me looks like her big sister here. ^_^
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: I'm one of the crazies
Wow! Hey there Belarus! This story has potential. Your writing is very good, I must say. And I really don't have much to say. Just have nitpicks. :) Walking down ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Rainbow (Chapter 2)
Boo! I'm here again! Okay, first off, I think this could be part of chapter one. I totally agree with diasamari, caps are not needed, if you really want to ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Rainbow (Chapter 1)
Hi Scarlet. I'm here to review your novel. I'll try to read all the chapters that are already up. :) One thing that I suggest you is to make shorter ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Boulder On My Shoulders
Hi there, Nike. I'm here to review. :) Okay, so one thing that really bugs me about this story is the fact that you say, "I like you and I ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Actual Society
Parents do not raise their children, society does. Unless the parents came from a different society xP, they will have to mix their 'culture' with the one they are in ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Actual Society
The saying, "In Rome do as the Romans do" is like saying: "If someone jumps off a cliff, jump after him." Observing our actual society, I came up with a ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Her Replica of Amber Kindness
Hi Gheala. Here to review, as requested. :) Okay, so I like this story. One thing that really left me hanging is the fact that you never described your characters, ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: On My Way To Ben & Jerry's
One question - what language does PARE mean STOP? Haha! Spanish. I'm in Puerto Rico! :)
Jun 3, 2011