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Re: An Adventurer's Faith
Thanks for the reviews everyone. So this poem means a lot to me, personally. And I thought I'd translated cause everything seems mysterious.Hahah. "I'm not from 'here', neither from 'there'." ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: An Adventurer's Faith
Okay, this all started writing an 'about me'. xD P.S. A friend choose the title. ;) Lol. I'm not from 'here', neither from 'there'. What they call roads is not ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Aurora
Hi there, CharifKhedr. First off, I wanna welcome you to YWS! Remember that if you have any questions you can always ask me. Okay, let's get to reviewing... ^_^ Your ...
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
D: Banned for banning me for that.
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned 'cause the only thing we have in common is that we love Italy. xD Lol.
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: You Found Me
Hi guys. As you may probably know (if you actually know me, Lol) I'm a strong Christian. xD And well, I had a dream with this Main Character and random ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: God's Love
Hi there, Zwinky. Nice poem, I like it very much. I have some nitpicks for you. :) Its never ending, it's always there, Add an apostrophe: It ' s never ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Society
Hi there, System. First off, welcome to YWS. Wow, I really love this poem. It has some punctuation problems, but it can be corrected. I love the idea you're bringing! ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Break that Fall {Chapter4}*edited*
Hi Drama. Here to review as requested. As always I have more nitpicks than anything, but I think you should write about the place where they are at. Use more ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: I Was Wrong
Hahaha... Hi RebelAnger. I gotta say this poem has a weak start, the opening stanza is kind of cliché. But when I kept on reading, I just loved it! xD ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Molly McCoys
Hahahahhaha! Moimow, this is so funny! xD Lol. Good stuff! Something that I would suggest is to write the numbers in letters. And also to place commas, cause you wrote ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: I am always with you.
Wow, Nate this poem is awesome. I totally love it! :O It's deep and the ending is just shocking. And the rhymes, it was so good and catchy. I bet ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Ambivalence
Thanks you, guys! ^_^
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Ambivalence
"I fear absolutely nothing but fears!" That distance they talked about, it felt so close that night. I had feared my fears for so long, but ambivalence conquered my heart. ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Break that fall {Chapter 3} *edited*
Dramaaaaaaaaaa! I'm here to review as requested! ^_^ I will check the other chapters later... as you may have noticed I'm a slow reviewier... sorry 'bout that. Well, first off ...
Jun 19, 2011
