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Re: Too Close To Home
Hi there Rascalover. I'm here to give you your review for free. :) Okay, lately, I'm not in the mood for romantic stories or anything like that, but I think ...
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Re: A Hand to Hold - A 7/7 memorial
Hi there, Mac ^_^ I'm here to give you your free review... This story is shocking, actually, I never knew about 7/7 until now. Your writing is great, no doubt. ...
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Re: Change Of Mood....Change Of Thoughts
ADAM!! AMAZING!! Geez! It's like you always choose all the perfect words. It flows greatly, and every line makes sense. :o I love the start, I love the end, and ...
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Re: Green Flowers
Hi guys. This poem is about revolution. Please, review. Thanks
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: A Story of a Ship and its Sailor
Wow! Hi there Anwesha! You've done an amazing job with this poem. I love it. And it's funny that it could easily be like some sort of hidden message covered ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: The lies we tell ourselves
Oh wow! Hi there, AngusMacdonald! Awesome job, kid! I like your poem, it has potential. But I have the feeling that the second and third stanza are by far better ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts of a Compulsive Liar
Hahaha Thanks Strawberrieamie... I've never watched that movie. O.O Lol.
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: You’re too young for the age of pain
Okay... Hi there smellslikespirit... I'm kind of confused on what age the character is... But that's probably cause I'm about to fall asleep on the keyboard. I guess it's seventeen? ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: When I thought I knew you
Hi there BlackRoz! I'm Solly. Nice to meet you. Hm... this poem is good for a beginner. What I recommend you is to add a metaphor or two to compare ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Love in the Rain
Hi there, sweethearts. Well, your poem is sweet, but it's kind of simple. I was wondering if you could think about writing this simple topic and turn it into something ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Just Keep Smiling.
Hi there Sianniiee! I've been colliding with this topic this couple last weeks. XD So today, I took my time to look at it and I noticed it's way better ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Snake Road
Hi there paintingtherain97! You've got style, my friend! XD Okay, so this poem is certainly different from what I've read. You have nice vocabulary, and you seem to make amazing ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: A Marlboro Kiss
Hi there dreamwalker. I walked on by this poem yesterday, and I loved it. But I see that for some strange and unknown reason, no one has commented on it. ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Exhaustion
Hi there, Sarebear! This is one lovely poem you've got here. I love how you manage to give us a message with not-so-common words. And the end just made me ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Celeste
Hi there Arciade! I'm Solly, here to comment cause I can't actually give you a review. I can't believe this story has only one review and only one like! This ...
Nov 9, 2011
