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Uh, hi there spinelli. Hmm... I like your poem. You managed to do well along your piece. But the end just left me hanging. >.< Seems like you randomly inserted ...

Adam! This is wonderful. I have to point out that this line amazes me every time I read it: That paranoia is as common as a cold

Oh, wow. Hi there MiniAliceSciuto! This is amazing. I'm not into Twilight, actually, I couldn't tell if I like it or not, because I haven't seen it. But you are ...

Hi again, ZombieSquirrel! Wow. This is quiet beautiful. :o Actually, I don't know why you wrote it as some sort of prose. I think this has a rhythm and it ...

Baahahahahahaah, loooooool. Hi again, AngusMacdonald. This is so true. I love the subject. Bahaha... It might open a lot of people's mind. It sounds cogent, I love the imagery, and ...

Hi there dasiamari! Well... your lyrics are neat! But I'm just writing this to give you a tiny, but HUGE advice... and that is, try to give your topics attractive ...

D'aww... Hi there... *forgot your real name* o.o Silented1! I love the subject. All the while I was imagining this little kid, and when I understood what this was about ...

Oh wow. Hi there, ZombieSquirrel. I love how you put so much emotion into this poem. Great imagery, you chose amazing words, and it flows neatly. Although, in the second ...

Okay... Hi there WinterBloom. This looks like a good prologue for a story, otherwise it doesn't convince me. I mean, What happened after the character told him about her feelings? ...

Hi there, Rysa. Okay, I like the subject your bringing us. But there are some grammar errors in your piece and punctuation problems. I'm sure you can correct that. Remember, ...

D'aww... Hi there, Rafe. Nice to meet you. :) Bahaha... I really like your poem. It flows and it's well written. I really love how you used something as modern ...

Oh, my... *raises hands* I'M YOUR FAN! Lol, xD Hi again, Anna! You're amazing! One of the best poets I've seen, seriously. Even though this is short, it's... just wow. ...

Ahahaahah! Thanks everyone

D'awww... Hi there anna...-inserts the numbers here- Well, this is one nice piece you've got here. It's cute and sweet, and it flows and rhymes greatly. You've done an amazing ...

I wrote this... uh... I think it's the best I can do... Funny right? xD Well, I need you guys to review it, giving me tips of how to improve ...