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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: In Which I Regret Not Hugging You

    Bahaha! Hi again, spinelli! ^_^ I collided with other of your pieces. Wow. You're really good writing stories. You manage to make them catchy, and entertaining, and while reading it... ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: How Two Things Fall Together

    Uh, hi there spinelli. Hmm... I like your poem. You managed to do well along your piece. But the end just left me hanging. >.< Seems like you randomly inserted ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Her Parents Are Xenophobes And She Knows It

    Adam! This is wonderful. I have to point out that this line amazes me every time I read it: That paranoia is as common as a cold

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Drawing of Alice Cullen/Ashley Greene

    Oh, wow. Hi there MiniAliceSciuto! This is amazing. I'm not into Twilight, actually, I couldn't tell if I like it or not, because I haven't seen it. But you are ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Shot Glass and a Switchblade

    Hi again, ZombieSquirrel! Wow. This is quiet beautiful. :o Actually, I don't know why you wrote it as some sort of prose. I think this has a rhythm and it ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A 'connected' society

    Baahahahahahaah, loooooool. Hi again, AngusMacdonald. This is so true. I love the subject. Bahaha... It might open a lot of people's mind. It sounds cogent, I love the imagery, and ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Miss you

    Hi there dasiamari! Well... your lyrics are neat! But I'm just writing this to give you a tiny, but HUGE advice... and that is, try to give your topics attractive ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Graveyard of sand

    D'aww... Hi there... *forgot your real name* o.o Silented1! I love the subject. All the while I was imagining this little kid, and when I understood what this was about ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Drown Me

    Oh wow. Hi there, ZombieSquirrel. I love how you put so much emotion into this poem. Great imagery, you chose amazing words, and it flows neatly. Although, in the second ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My love story

    Okay... Hi there WinterBloom. This looks like a good prologue for a story, otherwise it doesn't convince me. I mean, What happened after the character told him about her feelings? ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Last Words

    Hi there, Rysa. Okay, I like the subject your bringing us. But there are some grammar errors in your piece and punctuation problems. I'm sure you can correct that. Remember, ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Focused Eyes

    D'aww... Hi there, Rafe. Nice to meet you. :) Bahaha... I really like your poem. It flows and it's well written. I really love how you used something as modern ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Throwing Stones

    Oh, my... *raises hands* I'M YOUR FAN! Lol, xD Hi again, Anna! You're amazing! One of the best poets I've seen, seriously. Even though this is short, it's... just wow. ...

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Green Flowers

    Ahahaahah! Thanks everyone

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Even Then...

    D'awww... Hi there anna...-inserts the numbers here- Well, this is one nice piece you've got here. It's cute and sweet, and it flows and rhymes greatly. You've done an amazing ...

    Nov 14, 2011


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