GeeLyria

Hi there, Zaid. Again, you write lovely poems, Zaid. But I'm not sure if I've told you... I think they'd be more appreciated by the readers if you divide them ...

Ohhai there, undeadbunnie! Wow. I like this. I don't usually like this kind of songs, cause I'm one happy hippie hyper bunny, xD *looks at her avvie* but I can't ...

Hi there, Lornydoo! I'm going to try to give you a good review, one that makes sense. xD Okay, in the first stanza: I feel like you could've give us ...

Ohhai again, Mirasol. I like this. Powerful, beautiful, lovely ending, by the way. Although, I feel like you're rushing it in the other stanzas. Like you write really fast and ...

Hi there, my friend, Tuuuuuucker! ^_^ As always, lovely. Although, I have two things to say... Silly stuff. xD Like for example, listen to me when I say this, Tucker... ...

Oh, wow. Hi there, Formslipper. This is beautiful. I love how it flows, the idea you brought is really creative and when you come down to analyze it, it's the ...

Oh, wow. Hi there, my friend, Mirasol. Wow. At first I thought your poem was simple, but it's actually really deep. Perhaps the way you worded it is simple. That ...

Hi there, Trigger. Hm... I like the subject you're bringing us, and what you've got is certainly good. But like Zaid said, I think you could make it longer. I'm ...

Hi there Kafkaescence! Hm... I really like this. You managed to make your poem flow neatly and the message is fantastic. The words and the metaphors are lovely, you're giving ...

Hi there, MusicLover797! This is lovely, very sweet and I love that. You have talent, no doubt. I truly love the fact that you didn't say, "I remember when you ...

D'awww... Tenyo, this is so beautiful. Love the image and the colors...the fact that it looks like there's fog is amazing. It looks mysterious and interesting. I think you did ...

Hi there Impossible. Looooool. Harsh, girl. Good job. I'm sure this loser will find somenthing better to do, or he'll try to get better at lying. I've read like three ...

Hi there, Justagirl. Hmm... I like the concept of the poem and what you want to bring us. But it's really simple. What is written inside the parentheses is indeed ...

Bahaha. xD Lol. Thanks, Choco. And yes, I can speak English. But I was having a bad day when I posted. :lol:

Hi there, Choco