Gardevite

What's up what's up The first thing I thought when I read over this is that' there are some words that aren't essential or could be rephrased. Maybe I'm wrong ...

Yo! Man I love slam poetry! If you post more slam poems, feel free to post a voice clip, because these poems are made to be spoken not read. Anyway, ...

Yooo, Team Mystic! So I'm just gonna run through this, give my opinions and do a little rap up at the end. him and answers his question. The character hasn't ...

Hello! Its very difficult to review this type of poetry, due to the sensitive topic. I feel like I should be walking on eggshells, but I'm gonna try be honest ...

Hello! Personally, I see rhyming schemes as a trap. They're really, really ddifficult to do. Because of the rhyming scheme I felt this poem became too 'wordy' in a way. ...

Hello, So to begin this review I'm gonna talk about some specific elements of the language and mechanics of this piece. Just some typos or comments on particular use of ...

Hello! ^^ I'll be reviewing this for you today. So the first thing I noticed when I was reading this was certain repetitions of words, that were quite close together. ...

Hello! ^_^ Okay, so after reading this through a couple times, I think your biggest problem here is the rhyming. Rhyming has to be completely on point for it to ...

Back at it again. ;) Okay, first thing I'm noticing is that nothing is happening in this chapter. I mean, things are happening, but nothing too essential. Most of their ...

Awww!! This is suucchh a good chapter. I liked it way more than the first! Your description is really good here. Like Bam! Whoa good. It was the perfect amount! ...

Hello Hecate. ^_^ So for my review, I'm going to review as I read, then give an overall impression . ^_^ So the first thing I want to comment on ...

Hey Cesare! I have to point out one thing first, which is the fact that you used your real name in here (err, I think), and your location is on ...

Hey Pies! Happy Poetry Exchange (err is that a thing?) First things first, I'm going to rant about the title. Firstly, a haiku is 5/7/5, and by my count, this ...

Hello lost. I had to read this about two times before I understood what was going on. This is a problem because you can never guarantee that someone is going ...

Hey! I'm Hightop, and I'm going to review this for you! You know what I thought when I finished reading this? "What a pity, this could have been so much ...