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Gannon

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Filth and Finery

    Filth and Finery Phoenix Evaluation " Zeke's mouth turned up . . . " This early on, I would not suggest going by his nickname; to be perfectly honest, I ...

    Aug 8, 2006
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Orange Pirates: Chapters 1&2

    The Orange Pirates: Chapters 1&2 yoha_ahoy Before I begin, I would advise you to put a rating on here due to the language. Obviously, it is not required, but I ...

    Aug 7, 2006
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Nymph, the Spirit, and the Bird

    The Nymph, the Spirit, and the Bird theluckyflower Evaluation " Such a power, like most others, was connected to her emotions, and thankfully, Ihmelia was very happy. " You may ...

    Aug 6, 2006
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: the guardian moth

    Evaluation Chapter One " Jane farcry woke with little elegance, a damp patch of pillow soaked in her snot had formed through the night beneath her large nose, her eyes, ...

    Aug 5, 2006
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Black Swan

    To begin with, welcome to the Young Writers Society. I must ask you to read the rules here because they explain that you must post at least two comments on ...

    Aug 5, 2006


There is nothing to fear from someone who shouts.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart