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Re: Filth and Finery
Filth and Finery Phoenix Evaluation " Zeke's mouth turned up . . . " This early on, I would not suggest going by his nickname; to be perfectly honest, I ...
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Re: The Orange Pirates: Chapters 1&2
The Orange Pirates: Chapters 1&2 yoha_ahoy Before I begin, I would advise you to put a rating on here due to the language. Obviously, it is not required, but I ...
Aug 7, 2006 -
Re: The Nymph, the Spirit, and the Bird
The Nymph, the Spirit, and the Bird theluckyflower Evaluation " Such a power, like most others, was connected to her emotions, and thankfully, Ihmelia was very happy. " You may ...
Aug 6, 2006 -
Re: the guardian moth
Evaluation Chapter One " Jane farcry woke with little elegance, a damp patch of pillow soaked in her snot had formed through the night beneath her large nose, her eyes, ...
Aug 5, 2006 -
Re: Black Swan
To begin with, welcome to the Young Writers Society. I must ask you to read the rules here because they explain that you must post at least two comments on ...
Aug 5, 2006
