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Drake looked down at his watch, it reads 11:48 am. Well, i guess ill see if i can find the record shop around here, he thought. "Hey,"he said turning back ...

* I am starting to feel cursed... i have got no real feed back on either of my posts and the two rpgs that i am doing are going slow ...

I just feel left out

Drake watched the two standing there. "wow, the first day and there are already three of us talking about skipping the first day." he laugh and then realized since he ...

I really like this what type of beat is it written for because i see it as hard and fast but i could be wrong.

I am not sure when i should step in here so....

Okay first let me start by repeating the same old quote that i hear all the time " The poem is for the writer and maybe one other person and ...

Grammatically and spelling i agree with what the others said it is still pretty rough (but my spelling and grammar are rough too) but The concept is interesting and i ...

Drake wondered though the halls until the bell rang signafing that lunch had ended "for such a small school its hard to find my way around.." he said out loud ...

The NOFX sound end and "Without mythologies" started playing. His stomach began to rumble. I wish i would have saved some of that money mom gave me, but that animal ...

The lonely tree There is a tree in the middle of no where The loneliest tree I have ever meet Its all alone nothing stands near it the only way ...

i think this was good and it definitely reminded me of myself at time because being alone is one of my biggest fears but i think this is a little ...

well i agree with the imagery comment but i think that the language was great and unlike what was said i did love it and identify with it, it just ...

this is kinda beat in nature what i mean is that it express a love for art but it also feels to me like the old struggling artist walking the ...

this is a great piece i mean it had great emotion, i used to write really vague poems and it was until recently that i started writing actually and this ...