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Re: Sin
Good job. It shows a scary theme, yet the scariest thing is not the murderer. The only problems that I found were that it was pretty short, and seemed a ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Sip and Stone
Erm... what?
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Lies
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I guess the chorus is kinda out of place. If I'm gonna base a chorus after one i was listening to, I probably should have ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Fanfiction: The Wedding
That was great. You should of written the wedding in Breaking Dawn. Great description.
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
OMG. LOLLOLLOOLOLOL. This takes LOL to a whole new level. ROTFLOLOOB (Roll on the floor laughing out loud out of breath)
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Abortion
Wow. Great job. It is both deep and dealing with a serious issue. Plus, it can teach you about abortion(rather you want to or not.)
Feb 6, 2009