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Re: Long VS Short?
Your work is great But if you want to write a real novel try pencil and paper its more satifying it strains people eyes when they have to read something ...
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Re: Mean Girls
Even though i dont understand it i love it
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Re: Tormented Thoughts in n Insane Girl's Brain
theres nothing wrong with this poem thingy! i think you perfectly captured the essence of a 13 year old girl dont stop
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Re: Jelly Beans
I love how you made a cute poem by just reading the flavors of jelly beans It shows that poems don't always have to be dramatic this is a lovely ...
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Re: Invisible tears
I love short poems this is a good one it shows so much with so little keep it up
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Re: Secret Inspiration
I dont write a lot of poetry This poem to me is just a tinsy bit confusing but maybe thats just me... yep thats just me... i will get it ...
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Re: Sponge Bob
I LOVE SPONGEBOB This poem thingy is amused my very much It inspires me to put more joy in my own poems this isn't really a review is it? Your ...
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Re: love?
It's a great poem, i just was wondering what made you write this? Are you mad at love? glad? If you could go deeper down and bring up the real ...
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Re: invisible
I like it I like it alot
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Re: Boredom
I don't usually read a lot of poems, or songs, whatever you call this. But i would have to say this is a really great poem. Don't stop.
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Re: Like Fire
What is your passion?
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Re: A War in my Wardrobe
Blue adores me while Red ignores me Black hugs me while Green mugs me Yellow excites me while White denies me... Forever they shall remain the friends and enemies of ...
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Re: Testing
Tick... Tick... Tick... Tick... Tick... Tick...
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