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Re: What Do You Admire?
I admire the pants they put up with all the nasty I admire leopard print where would 50-plus-year old women be without it?? I admire sparkles they make everything THAT ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: I'm sorry.
It is full of emotion, it kinda makes me depressed because it reminds me of something...but overall its a very deep and serene-like poem. I loved it. Never change, don't ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Joy
Good word choice. Shows a lot of emotion. Brings life to the words. Lovely, sweet, poem. Don't stop.
May 23, 2011 -
Re: The Prettiest Girl In The World
This is a very sweet poem. It shows charisma. Minor flaws. But overall, great work. Don't stop.
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Spring
It is very sweet, it is cool how you can bring out a lot of emotion with little words. Amazing work, dont stop.
May 23, 2011 -
Re: My Dreams
This poem is very inspirational for someone whos leaving college or high school or something. It has lots of emotion and good desciptions. Very nice, dont stop.
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Take Flight
I dont usually write poems about animals or nature, but you make me look at birds a whole NEW WAY! or if the little birds was symbolic for something, it ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: The Morning Cha Cha
i just...i just... i dont know... i ran out of things to sorry...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Their Apocalypse
Deep man deep i dont know if i could ever write something as complex and deep as this Why did you write this story? Just wondering
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Don't Come To My Funeral
This is a really great poem, depressing-ish, but great I dont think i should be telling you how to write your poems, its not right YWS was made for people ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Two Koi
Very lovely poem
May 21, 2011 -
Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?
Never take a writing class
May 21, 2011 -
Re: The Morning Cha Cha
I swing out of bed and saunter to the bathroom with my clothes I twirl in the mirror and fix my hair I stomp down the stairs and get my ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Elf
i think if i laughed you would be offended so i will just say this is a great piece of writing you make me look at elfs a whole new ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry
I dont know emo-ish poems are always dramatic and have something to do with hurting or doing some unorthodox just saying not all of them but most of them do
May 21, 2011
