Gabe_15

Hey, sup I like languages myself, I speak english, portuguesse, spanish and i'm learning japenese too. Alright, peace man.

A good piece. I think the tittle is a bit weird, couldn't you change it to The Gem of Elements or something, it just sounds a little off.

hey, wats up? Im not a big fan of poetry, but this was pretty good. "and I just want to sing along to the strings of your untuned guitar" I ...

Hey, this was well written, with awesome descriptions and good fluency. Good job and good luck.

hey there, this is really good! I wanna read more know to know what happens. The beggining had some really good descriptions, and I hope you plan to introduce all ...

sounds like a little kid's book.

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hey, thanks for the help, I have never played runescape, my friend came up with the name, I guess thats where he got it from. I didn't realize I was ...

ok, the Deltora series is not that popular in the U.S. I had never heard about it until my cousing came over with a bunch of the books and I ...

Well, the writing was pretty simple. I read up to the second last on (11) and stopped. I hated where it was going. I don't want to put in any ...

(note: This isn't my best work, (I know this sounds cheesy) but I had this dream of this weird world where I was being hunted down, so Im sorta trying ...

Hey everyone and I am really thankfull for all your comments. I'd never would have noticed the whole adverb thing, so thanks for pointing that out. I had this picture ...

Hey, im a highschool student who recently rediscovered his love for reading, and now is trying to write some stories. Im working on a story with vampires, etc, because I ...

Prologue: My name is Ryan. Over the last decade, I have gotten myself in the middle of a bloody war between blood-thirsty creatures of the night. Both sides were out ...