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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: I chose life

    Your welcome! And i think you should write more of this since i think you are really good.

    Oct 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Beast Within

    If you want me to. lol. :)

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: I don't understand

    Wish i can express it like that. great poem.

    Sep 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Irrationality - Monday

    In my opinion, i think that you should balance the conversation part and the description part equally. Its like your conversation part nearly takes up most of the page. It ...

    Sep 27, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: Family Memories, Dead Wasps and Swimming Pools

    Rhyming might add to the flow and suspense, i suppose.

    Sep 25, 2016


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