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True and false Love It has often been said without end, Man never values things to which he should tend, Those who love us, we never love back, and those ...

Love So Close Days and Nights, I searched in vain. Every step I took, taken in pain. Yet I feel that all this pain will yield no gain, My tears ...

This is a beautiful poem with a very bright concept There are some spelling errors However no poem can be perfect Looking forward to reading more from you

Saying Goodbye When Love dragged us to each other, We tried to so much to make it pass over, But all it did was take us down and under, My ...

A second determines a lifetime, what you do now may make or mar your destiny. For everything done under the surface of the earth, there is a consequence. Think Big ...

This is wonderful yet I have to say that It is not a lyric poem. It is more of a narrative poem I liked the fact that you tried something ...

This is very good,keep it up. An almost perfect use of the different forms of art. I could not have expected better.

Nice story,you have a great imaginative sense,develop it well and soon you will be on top. Well done.I think you were a little wacky sometimes and you went off the ...

Your Smile So Bright People may wonder why I get everywhere late An habit which so much I hate But breaking the habit I cannot Hard to break like a ...

I have not really covered your wonderful story to my satisfaction to criticise it but this is all the same a wonderful story. Nice introduction(prologue) that makes one really love ...

I have to commend the wonderful thoughtfulness in the essay. Very factual article and really enlightening about money. You also did very nice to have mentioned the positives do well ...

I have to commend the wonderful thoughtfulness in the essay. Very factual article and really enlightening about money. You also did very nice to have mentioned the positives do well ...