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Great poem. Simple and still passionate. Keep writing.

This is great, at least, it has the potential to be. You have excellent thought pattern and the rhyming is okay too, as you were able maintain it. However, your ...

THE NAIL SCARRED HAND In the beginning, it was all about the beauty. But then there was the beast and the beauty needed a savior but in the end, it ...

THE NAIL SCARRED HAND In the beginning, it was all about the beauty. But then there was the beast and the beauty needed a savior but in the end, it ...

You have a very wonderful idea. Your expression is also very commendable. your punctuation is a little faulty and makes your poem unnecessarily confusing. With gentle fingers, and staining ink, ...

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This is very nice. Though the poem is short, it expresses so much emotion. I also think this poem could be made longer and still remain as simple as this ...

I beg on my knees, I plead for a kiss, Just a touch from you I crave, All my joy to you I gave. My love for you is like ...

This is very great. As I guess others should have mentioned, Some parts of the poem flow quite well while others don't. Overall,I think this is a great poem. Not ...

This is very great. As I guess others should have mentioned, Some parts of the poem flow quite well while others don't. Overall,I think this is a great poem. Not ...

This is wonderful. Very Unique. But above the hilarious pattern and wonderful concept of your poem, its seems quite confusing. Like already mentioned, the first stanza seems to follow a ...

Most Beautiful I tried to ignore you, I found it impossible to do. I tried to speak to you, I found that even more difficult. Your sight is so astonishing, ...

I like your poem a lot and I think you should continue writing poems. Choosing a favorite part in your poem is not easy because every part is good I ...

I really like this poem. The beginning portion of the poem is a bit rough but the rest is excellent. I also agree with the guy that said that the ...

Wow, this is wonderful I love the emotion I love the imagery, its like I can see it. Really makes one shiver