Fye

Hey! I think this is a much better story than Break Neck. Just a few spelling mistakes and such you might have to be careful of. Always check your work ...

Wow, this is much better than the first piece! I needed a second proper read before I could spot any mistakes! Much improvement. “And by the way, Sonata, I’m far ...

Oh, this is nice. Wonderfully nice. I loved your beginning and your ending the most! It was simply perfect. Overall it gave me this mysterious feeling. Silent but aware. I ...

Yes, I'm back to comment on #2! When she had gotten here , all the boys were after her. She had long blonde hair, when I say long, I mean, ...

Hey! It was quite a nice story. In my opinion, there are some corrections to be done, though. Now , I know that I wasn’t the most attractive girl in ...

I chose 4. First book I read I think should be those that are meant to teach you how to read that came in a series. The first and easiest ...

Hi, just to tell you a small fact I picked out. XD You mentioned Matt is partially Malaysian, and that's great! I live in Malaysia. But there's one thing. Well, ...

Is this a short story or chapter-by-chapter? I'll consider it a chapter-by-chapter. Anyway, this one was rather catching. You need to break it into paragraphs, though. :D “Tara? Is everything ...

Thanks, Twit! Appreciate it very much. *hugs* Yeah, I don't know how punctuation works either. I was wishing someone might help me! Thanks again.

This was really quite brilliant! I loved it very much. Yes, you have several grammar, spelling and first/third person mistakes; all of which has been noted well enough already. :) ...

:D First times are always scary! *steps out of safety zone in the writing world*

Fye came from Fi that came form fieryglaciers. So, yeah, that explains it. :D Yay for 3-letter names!

Thanks a muchies to all of you for the comments. I didn't think I could change it much though, considering that it's my first complete poem. Plus, this was written ...

Wrote this quite some time ago. I admit I'm not a poem writer, so treat this as my beginning. :D Enjoy! ____ Blocked myself, I know that I did; And ...

Short, but moving! From the first sentence it caught my eye. First sentences are always crucial on whether the reader will continue reading or not. But you made it in ...