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Haha yeah, what I meant was that actually it's okay if your chapters are really long but as phorcys might have suggested people won't really have the mood to crit ...

Finally! I can understand what you're trying to say Fan haha I was a bit blur the first time I read your crit. Thanks! I've got some ideas for the ...

Hey everyone sorry for the late late reply. I'll see if I can edit it a bit after Tuesday. Via and Cade>> Yeah, I get it when you meant that ...

Yeah, I'm still here. I think it's better if someone continued on with the throne room scene. What's the prince wanting them to do?

Seth took the time she swayed with her arms flailing to rush ahead so he could catch her before she dashed herself against the pavement. However, he slipped as he ...

A welcome breeze blew across in from the sea, sporadically turning into a sudden gust of wind that made the hem of her dress flap wildly. "Welcoming breeze", perhaps? And ...

Title: Alena Genre: Not too sure. Fiction, though. Synopsis: After a traumatic experience when young, Zahra(MC) finds herself with two personalities; herself and one who calls herself Alena. In the ...

Thanks, Alainna. ^^ Favourite piece? I've really got loads(some I probably can't even remember). Well.. erm, I'll name a few. I have a book on rock preludes by Christopher Norton. ...

My life is messed up , I thought to myself. It should be in italics, and a coma at the end of the thought. The sun was shining in my ...

Erm.. Japan? We're quite far away, really(feel retarded, feel very very retarded!!! *maniacal laughter*). I'm in south-east Asia, and Japan's not in that category. The Peninsular Malaysia's at the sou

Fye made a look of fear. How did she know? And yet, in truth, she was not afraid. She always had this knack of tricking people into believing what she ...

Yes! I have been here quite a while but never posted in this forum. Hmm. I like internet names.(Huh, what kind of first-sentence intro is that?!) Why? My real name ...

Heloo Candy! Excited you must be! Fun you must be! Call you Candyfloss I will be - I mean, I will!!! *high-5s* Yes, music(and piano) is a big part of ...

Run away from the Hungry Bunny, He'll gobble up all your broccoli! *Laughs* Thank you, Bunny, for eating my broccoli! Crunch and munch goes the Hungry Bunny, drinking up anything ...

It’s 3 a.m. and a spell is cast. The book flips open to a sacred past. The verses lift themselves in perfect grace; Revealing the meanings behind each face. A ...