FutureAstronaut

@anasan2, Thank you for helping me with my descriptions, I edited the post and made sure to add some, I still might add some more later. Also, thank you for ...

This story is very well written, although some punctuation errors can be found. When ending a quote that doesn't end in an exclamation point or question mark, a comma needs ...

Chapter I I woke up, slipping in and out of consciousness. There was only a desk and it's chair in the stark white room I was in. A door opened ...