FutureAstronaut

Hey guys! Sadly, Ben got into a car accident and has passed. I'm John and I want you all to know his dad is back and all is well other ...

I walked around, putting my gun in the air and shooting repeatedly. People scattered, running towards the store shelves to hide. “Nobody move!” I bellowed, shooting again for emphasis. My ...

Great story! The plot makes sense and the characters are down-to-earth. I didn't see very many mistakes if any. Some sentances are confusing, like: The sun is still pouring over ...

I waited, looking at the fire-provider playing with sticks, poking the fire, “What 'r ya doing! Stop playing with the fire! Yeah, dropping them on the ground is going to ...

I really enjoyed the story, though the part where the main character went cannibal was kind of creepy. There was a lot of errors in the story, like capitalization was ...

This story is very well written, with little to no mistakes that i saw. The plot line plays out very well and the descriptions are spectacular. The way the setting ...

I think your poem is heart warming. I didn't see any mistakes which shows how much time you put in this poem (along with the poem itself of course). I ...

Hello ZeroKelvin! I'm FutureAstronaut and I'm semi-new here but I know a lot of how and what to do here at YWS so if you are ever in need of ...

I thought the story was cute and had a plot line, BUT: 1: Capitalization. It was overlooked in a lot of places, such as at the beginning of sentences. You ...

This is part of the prolouge, all I have done so far

The zombie walked up, his clothes ripped and detaching from his body. Drake looked up, staring into the creature's eyes. Finally, he got a good look at them. He looked ...

Hi fellow characters! I'm Benjamin Garjone, and I would like to know who you are. I'm from the story Take Wing, which was created by Christopher and I would enjoy ...

Thank you SubjectBlue for that. I will make sure to PM if I need help. Can you spread the news that I'm here and to review my work.

Hello YWS! I am new to the site and haven't been writing for too long. I'm Christopher or FutureAstronaut. Call me Chris, or anything that has to do with Christopher ...

This story was exactly what a scary book should be, scary. I was confused on what happened when he smashed his nose. I think that he fell through a window ...