Funkymomo

That's better. Now it's perfect! You could win an award for this! I like the feeling of it too.

You run right past me ad don’t even stop to wave good-bye And, elmo, not ad

thanks!

You spelled Gaston wrong

I liked it, it was an interesting perspective on his death. I think you shouldn't have put in the stuff about hunting being illegal and those details. Other wise it ...

It was great, one of the few poems that I actually kind of wanted to read. I like the message and the only thing I have to say is maybe ...