FunkyFlower14

thanx ppl for you replies...i suppose that i did make a few mistakes so thank you for pointing them out. otherwise, i'll take it all into account and work on ...

love the verse with the 'you're beautiful' bit in it...great imagery overall though the rhythm really needs a little work. pretty good, keep writing, ~mez~

i agree with the other reviewers...the idea of spelling home down the side was great. the rhythm and wordin could take a little work but i like the blunt, honest ...

It's cold, it's icy, it's bitter to the bone, It floats from the heavens, it's landing unknown, Silent and light, It twirls but is steady, It's corners sharp and sting, ...

the poem (bubblewrap) was extremely true for me because i can sort of relate to it. i loved the wording and overall, it's pretty good in terms of subject-matter and ...

beautiful wording and overall, a really sweet subject but the rhyming was a little confusing as there is no speciifc rhyme pattern. otherwise, short but beautiful! ~mez~

hey, this was pretty good in terms of tension and bringing in emotions but i agree with the other reviewers, it would have been better if written as a piece ...

pretty good overall but for me, it was really confusing. the wording was great and the imagery fantastic but there was no proper rhythm in there. great job though! ~mez~

awesome poem! just loved the imagery and although the rhyming at the beginning seemed a little forced, the wording was beautiful. You mite wanna work on the rhythm in this ...