Fullmetal13

I like the theme of this and it can probably be critiqued to death but i am personally against critiquing something that comes from someones heart and i can tell ...

this...really really touched me...i struggle everyday with everyone calling me a faggot or asking me if i like d*** or other things and this...this is really something. i love it ...

I like this. I'm not going to ultra critiqu but i really like this. It seems like everywhere when someone starts doing someone everyone else does something. It's up to ...

I'm not going to critique every little nitpick of this. I think over all your word choice was good but a little redundant. I agree that our generations falling to ...

this is wayyyyyy too long to read.......................................................................................................................................................................