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Fullmetal13

  • A Better Tomorrow

    How do you see me?Am I weird, not normalgross, ugly, strange or informalDo you see my beauty,beneath my skin?Do you seeMy pasts sins?Or maybe what I've been through,The horrors I've ...

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  • Young Writers Censorship

    I just want to say that I like this site. I really do but I think this point system is a little...controlling. I think that critiqueing is taken way to ...

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  • Critiques Welcome

    I’ve been abandoned And beatenAnd this life.I’m treatin’Everything like it’s a joke.Being serious hurts.I’d much rather play around,Liftin’ up girls skirtsPain catches up,When you stick to

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  • Weddings and What My Plans Are

    Well a while ago, my cousin, Sam got married. My grandma catered the whole thing and it was big and splashy and a real pain in the ass. I love ...

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  • Offended People Offend Me!!!

    Hey guys it's me, Walter. For you dimwits still telling me to post my blog on the blog thingy it's not going to happen. Posting it on a forum gets ...

    3 min read
  • My Blog...My Bloggity Blog...Blog

    Hello there nation. It's me, Walter. I know that I disagree with people on stuff but what the hell? Who critiques a blog? It's not really even like worth it. ...

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  • Boxxy Is Love

    Hey everyone it's Walter again. Sorry I haven't been keeping with the blog lately. Really I'm just gettin really frustrated at people bein' stupid. I've already expressed my distaste at ...

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  • The New Yws

    Hey there everyone, it's Walter. This is going to be short. Holy crap i guess all the complaining kinda paid off. No more points. I feel accomplished. I love you ...

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  • Our Summer in Silverdale

    yesterday we were holding hands now the pieces of my heart are in strands how could you pick him over me? you were obviously too blind to see that I ...

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  • Unthinkable

    Lately I’ve been just so stressed I really wish that I could take a rest Stressing about grades just to please my dad Then He’s in the hospital cause his ...

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  • Demise of The Guardian

    Jack floated down into Bunny's hole with a sad expression on his face. Little ice teardrops formed on his cheeks. "Bunny...they're dead. Pippa and Jaime died in a car ...

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  • Kayla

    A his and hers perspective after a breakup

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