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Hi Emma! Thank you so much for the review. And the animals I had actually are not the Zodiac ones. You're right--maybe I should use the original animals and maybe ...

Hey, Hawkie! Thanks for the review. :) I think I fixed most of your suggestions, but I'm not sure what you think about the more padded ending thingy. You don't ...

Yay, the updated version is now up! A link to it is here . Previous reviewers, no need to review, but I would like at least a couple critiques including ...

Hi again! :) I'm just spewing out these reviews... Private Mekki , only survivor of squad 2115 I suggest adding in the bolded comma and also capitalizing squad. It seems ...

Here I am, yet again! :) A review for your updated version comin' up... I commented on your opening sentence already, but I think you didn't change anything except making ...

Haha, thanks June! :) Yeah, I have a little problem with getting caught up in stories and not bothering to explain what's actually happening. Nice pointers. I'm going to have ...

I think this would more likely fit in the Writers Corner section. Yeah...'cause this isn't actually a literary work.

Wow, nice job! This looks so much better than before! :) Now, one of the next annoying rules about punctuation, is that if words come after someone's dialogue quotation, then ...

Haha, thanks Mo. :) I'm so glad you liked it! Ah, Octo, in answer to your thoughts, yes, LiQian is Chinese. That's right--I'm really proud of my Chinese Heritage, and ...

Hey guys, thanks for reviewing. :) I think I fixed most of your suggestions...hm. Hehe, I really like Marie's line that Hawkie quoted. Yes, it was totally meant to be ...

Thank you so much, Octo. Review much appreciated. :D :) I think I fixed most of your suggestions--hehe, I bet I still have to relax a lot on the fighting ...

Thank you, Pudin, your review is much appreciated. :) My main character is LiQian--I thought that was obvious, since she's the one that goes over the threshold, and I don't ...

Thank you so much for the suggestions, Pink! I'm finally starting to get some reviews...hehe. :D :) :P :wink: :smt001 :smt002 I'm so happy! OK, see you guys later; I ...

OK, thank you, Amy. :D Awesome review, by the way! Even though you didn't suggest it, I decided to describe the Primids a little more. I'm not sure I was ...

About the YWSF usergroup thing, I couldn't seem to make a new topic for my fanfiction. So I just posted it here. Can you really post entries in the YWSF ...