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Re: 1st Script
Thank you for the script thing. It's very detailed! But it also looks incredibly complicated... Thank you for the helpful comments. I'll try to fix my post according to them, ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: 1st Script
The Girl, the Serviceman, and The Boss: Act 1 Parts: Girl; (also says Girl’s Thoughts) Serviceman; The Boss Girl’s Thoughts: I didn’t know that the computer would blow up on ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Prologue of MY STORY
I think this was OK. Like you said, you were just starting when you wrote this. I like the descriptions, but I'm incredibly new here. And also, I'm probably a ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Contest Entry - Terrible Writing Prompts
Wow, this is good! I liked Emma and her description. I also enjoyed the ending part and your other descriptions-- of the police officer, the ring, and basically the whole ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hi! Thank you so much for welcoming me here! My name is Chinese, so it may be hard to pronounce. My name is LiQian, but I go by SiSi (pronounced ...
Oct 9, 2008
