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Oh wow, I didn't notice the library bit.

Thanks, and I'll take the italics into mind when I start my editing! :D

I'm so glad! It's awesome that you also read Rick's stuff! I wish I was as good at making stuff sound like books as you are! You're so goooooooooooood!

Thanks so much! Yeah, in the next chapter I'm planning on having him describe his telepathy, and tell everyone what his relationship with Sara is.

No problem. I'm about to post an uber long forum, if you could give me some advice too! Cx

Edited, and made the changes. Thanks for your help!

Fixed it, I think, and made it much longer.

How do I edit my stuff?

It definitely helped, and the 'his' girlfriend thing was a typo, it was meant to be 'I'. My next chapter will be much better, I hope. Thanks so much for ...

Thanks for the review! In the next chapter, I'll definitely be doing what you told me. And I know, the Academy was founded by a woman, and since vixen sometimes ...