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Re: If I Were a Bumblebee
Haha I like your poem. It's nice and uplifting. I love small rhymes that allow you to visualize a short story. Very sweet. Loved it.
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: just gold.
I really really REALLY enjoyed reading this poem. It was so comforting to read. It reminded me of a mother singing to her child; so beautiful. I loved the line ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Things I Hate
I LOVED THIS!!! I think we hate similar things.. Lovely poem!
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: In a Bathtub I Once Wrote:
I appreciate all the positive feedback, as well as your suggestions. It means so much to me! I'm still kind of nervous I've been writing for as long as I ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: In a Bathtub I Once Wrote:
First post on here... I am very nervous. Interested in any feedback! Thanx! She drips down like a candle, Hot with thoughts she can't handle. She's with her crayons but ...
Dec 17, 2010