Frenchchilla

good but I thought that It could have ended better and I KNEW IT I KNEW THAT YOU FELT LIKE THAT AND YOU ARE FINALLY TELLING PEEPS...okay now that is ...

I like it there was really good imagery but I agree with "Incandescence" but I think it was an overall good poem.

I really like it, the rhyming was good and it was really good but I thought that at the end it kinda stopped with an awkward line But I dunno..

Hey good writing I liked a lot of the ways that you described the objects within your poems and uhhhh I couldn't have written it.........