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Re: The Mercy of the Mask
Wow...this is so powerful. It reaches right into the core of the reader and makes them pay attention. The imagery and metaphors are gorgeous. I don't think there's anything that ...
May 12 -
Re: The Mercy of the Mask
Wow...this is so powerful. It reaches right into the core of the reader and makes them pay attention. The imagery and metaphors are gorgeous. I don't think there's anything that ...
May 12 -
Re: Princess Magdalena’s origin-Siren’s Desire
This is gorgeous. The imagery, pacing, and even metaphors are amazing! You did a very good job writing this. This is a very good intro to your story, it hooks ...
May 12 -
Re: We each go through so many bodies in each other
This poem is almost hopeful. It speaks of the future and the past, which is a really good combination. I love the imagery and metaphors. The imagery is very good, ...
May 11 -
Re: the one where i write a poem about myself (and it's still about you)
Woah. This poem has is many metaphors and descriptions, its amazing. You did amazing on this!! Its VERY good!!
May 11