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Re: The Mercy of the Mask
Wow...this is so powerful. It reaches right into the core of the reader and makes them pay attention. The imagery and metaphors are gorgeous. I don't think there's anything that ...
May 12 -
Re: The Divided House
This was so deep...I felt your hurt and pain bleeding through the pain, filled with metaphors and imagery. Your words paint the image beautifully. The only thing I noticed thay ...
May 12 -
Re: gave up
This is a very good poem. In the beginning, it makes me feel think of the future, possibly hopeful. The metaphors really reinforce this. It makes me think that the ...
May 11